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So this is my first illustration of Elizabeth from my novel "Little Did I Know..."

Elizabeth is a curios girl from a small town. But when she comes to the big city she stumbles upon the unknown underground world and becomes part of it. First she is a victim, then a rebel, then a killer.

Read Chapter one here: [link]

Art and OC (c) - AnayaDeath

A speedpaint of this - [link]
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Vision: 3 Stars

I love the secret hidden weapon o.o That is really unexpected!

I also love her hairstyle. Cutte<3

To be honest, she seems a bit too... long. People are usually measured in heads, and an average character is measured with 4-6 heads. However, when I measure this character in heads, she is well over the length of 7 or 8 heads! She is extremely tall, but her head is too small.

Good job on the folds and such, however, the folds in the skirt seem unnatural when it comes to the point where she is touching her skirt. Look at clothing, how does it flow? How does it move? Study that.

I also suggest shading with a different darker color than your base. It makes the picture pop more.

I suggest using more dynamic poses. This pose is static, stiff, boring, and awkward. I HIGHLY HIGHLY suggest looking at this really small snippet of information! It only takes about a minute to read [link]

Also- her facial expression looks very spaced and dead... practice facial expressions! They help bring your character to life.

Originality:2.5 Stars

Original character, I give you props. However, cliche pose, anime girl, etc.

Technique: 3.5 Stars

The technique is fine. I hate trying to judge by technique, to be honest.

Impact: 2 Stars

Overall, this piece does not jump out at me. The pose is static, the anatomy incorrect, and there is a need for a background.